(REVISION #8) When a naïve, rambunctious teenager muscles in on her sister’s singing career in 1963’s England, her dream of stardom fizzles out as she succumbs to the excesses of a Rock’n Roll lifestyle, ends up pregnant, and after a botched illegal abortion, has to re-evaluate her life to halt her downward spiral.

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Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

This is a wordier version of the same logline posted several drafts ago. Seeing as much of the same story problems still exist, I recommend you study the comments you got to date and reevaluate this concept on a fundamental level.