When a socially inept nerdy teen falls for the newest cool girl in town, he must battle her 7 evil exes before he can date her.

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Scott Pilgrim

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Karel Segers · Mentor · 3,570 pts

I've added the inciting incident to the logline, as well as the ultimate goal "before he can date her".

Karel Segers · Mentor · 3,570 pts

Thanks Craig! I fixed that one for C-Bomb as I'd like the Classics loglines to be examples of how to do it.