Titanic: D. S. V.
How could a computer virus kill a person?
What is the "psychological" war that you're talking about?
Condense the beginning:
"While inspecting a high-tech submarine, a (character flaw here) defence officer ..." continue from there.
Words like DOD and PSYOPS are just too much; they confuse the reader instead of clarifying the story for them. The core is that an officer on board a nuclear sub tries to avoid being murdered, right? So get THAT PART working first, then jazz it up afterwards.
How does it look so far?
Episode 000 [00/00/00] 00.
On board the submarine Titanic, a civilian computer technician is seen downloading something into a computer. After he is done, he prepares to leave the boat with his equipment. He is seen being checked by ship security, and then is given permission to disembark.
He heads towards his car, but a limo pulls up by him. The door opens up and a man tells him to get in. As he sits down, the computer technician is asked if the job is completed, to which he replies that it is.
As he proceeds to leave the limo, the unknown man then draws a gun on the technician, kills him; and then has the body placed in his own car.
*INTRO CREDITS*
