Sofie a uni student is found dead in the park. Two teenagers, Alex and Jim are walking home when man barges through them covered in blood, then they see the body.

Needs to be more clear.

Actually 2 scenes here: Sofie is found and then Alex , Jim and the man in the blood scene :)

Well this seems very boaring and not interesting needs some work on it for future needs more of a storyline.

scene logline? or is that the entire film?