The dying emperor of a crumbling galactic empire struggles to hold onto power amidst political intrigue and a coming war.

I will re-post based on the commentaries

Your logline just identify the setting - the situation on the beginning and what's at stakes. But it does not tell a story. Identify an antagonist (not necessarily a person), but there is that missing "so he must - "

Like Star Wars BUT from the Emperors point of view!! I LOVE IT