The great British icon suffers the slings and arrows of outrageous farce when an illiterate English twit, Will, and a black fry cook, Shakespeare, team up to become the world’s single greatest playwright.

Yes, I did. I just thought the goal (converting beggars to a theatre guild) was a bit weak, and the stakes (being arrested), weaker still, so I threw in something I thought might spike it a bunch.

The last logline, from your last post, is perfect for the story plot as it currently stands, IMO. Great job!

Geno, did you miss my storyline logline or just not like it?

From above:

An illiterate English twit, Will, and a black fry-cook, Shakespeare must convert The Beggars Guild into a Theatre Troupe before the sheriff decides to jail them as a public nuisance.

Btw, that was Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), judge...