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Feels like you are on the right track. With Zach's suggestion the logline does seem to flow and work better, but it still feels like it is missing something. I noticed your title is Emily and the Dragon. Perhaps we should get a feel for the dragon in the Logline. What happens when someone solves it? Is it the person she wanted or someone she least expected?
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A rewrote your logline, I'm not saying it's better, but at least it's not filled with grammatical errors.
A humdrum college student is constantly being told she doesn't take enough risks, so she creates a math problem and proclaims the first person who solves it will be her next date.
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