Based on true events. “On holiday, a vain German Luftwaffe officer and his family forget to disembark their train and end up in a Nazi dead camp, not keen on uninvited visitors.”

Thanks Gabor, maybe in a better world...

Hi Rutger, I think what you wrote as synopsis is just the right one!! I don't think anyone would ban it because of the number of words.

You are right Gabor, but I have to look that up again in the book Treblinka. Something went wron at Malkinia station/junction. If i remember correctly tey forgot to disembark their train Malkinia station. In an older version this was in the logline.

"During World War II, a railway line, called the Malkinia-Siedlce line, ran directly east from Warsaw to Malkinia Junction. The Treblinka extermination camp was located 4 km or 2.5 miles southeast of the Malkinia Junction. The Germans built a spur line from the junction into the Treblinka camp and train cars were backed into the camp, 20 cars at a time.'

The logline must be somewhere inbetween 25 and 35 words, I want to stay as close to 27 words as possible without leaving vital information out of the logline

Synopsis:
A German Luftwaffe officer, his wife, daughter and two sons travel by train to their holiday destination ? the village of Treblinka. They forget to disembark at Malkinia station and end up in Treblinka concentration camp. Now they must convince the camp commander to spare their lives.?

Logline:
Based on true events On holiday, a vain German Luftwaffe officer and his family forget to disembark their train and end up in a Nazi dead camp, not keen on uninvited visitors.?