When a man wakes up in an unfamiliar bar with no memories, he is compelled to solve the mystery and reconsider his own relationship with death.

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torgodog · Samurai · 590 pts ★ Accepted

When a man wakes up with no memories in the world where people interact through a game of Rock. Paper. Scissors. , he must solve the mystery of his predicament and consider his relationship with death.

torgodog · Samurai · 590 pts

Does refer to the movie already made.

"When a man wakes up with no memories in the world where people interact through a game of Rock. Paper. Scissors. , he must solve the mystery of his predicament."

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

>>>Consider his relationship with? death?

Vague, needs clarity. Specifically, what does that mean in terms of what he must do?

And a plot is organized around one prime objective goal.? Not two.? Just one.? A logline is about the struggle to achieve that one goal. All other goals are secondary and subordinate to the prime goal -- and extraneous to a loglne.

So what is his singular primary goal: solve the mystery or "consider his relationship with death" (whatever that means)?

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And does this refer to a movie already made?? Because that's what? "examples" are for.

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