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If he said, she was "crushing him poker" it would work, but if he says "crushing him at the local casino" it gets a little confusing.
I have no idea why there is such a problem with the word "crushing". It's a term used in all sports to indicate when one side is beating the other by such a large margin there's no way for the other side to recover.
Thanks everybody for your comments and helpful feedback.
I think I will definitely be removing the word "crushing" from the logline as it's been confusing for everyone. I'll keep it mind that not everyone is aware of poker speak.
Kriss, I agree with you that the logline is word heavy so I'll be looking to pare it back about five or six words.
This story would be somewhere between a drama and a comedy - a dramedy!
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