When a planet in another galaxy is faced with annihilation, a plan hatches to have Franklin, an ordinary boy with extraordinary abilities from earth, help save the planet from destruction from the evil being known as Xero.

I like Nir Shelter's notion that the boy is kidnapped.? Furthering the concept, why not it be the case that there is nothing extraordinary about the boy as is growing up on planet earth; everybody thinks he's a loser.? So why would they kidnap him?? Because he has latent abilities that only become manifest on the other planet.

Having that as the core concept-- the hook-- might have the makings for a good sci-fi, coming-of-age story.

fwiw.

I like Nir Shelter's notion that the boy is kidnapped.? Furthering the concept, why not it be the case that there is nothing extraordinary about the boy as is growing up on planet earth; everybody thinks he's a loser.? So why would they kidnap him?? Because he has latent abilities that only become manifest on the other planet.

Having that as the core concept-- the hook-- might have the makings for a good sci-fi, coming-of-age story.

fwiw.

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