When a reclusive writer tries to save her identical twin from spousal abuse, she sparks an entourage where all trails lead to a Scottish village and the dark secret of her suppressed memory is revealed in the climax of the church’s fundraising bachelor auction.

I would have to agree that the ending muddies the waters. It would seem that telling us where the climax is rather than what is driving us to that point confuses what you want us to walk away with. A compelling reason to hear your story. The concept sounds okay but it could do with an edit.

My decoding of the logline is:

When a reclusive writer struggles to rescue her twin sister from spousal abuse, she opens up a dark secret in their past.

But have no idea what that means.

My decoding of the logline is:

When a reclusive writer struggles to rescue her twin sister from spousal abuse, she opens up a dark secret in their past.

But have no idea what that means.