When a soldier returns from an overseas deployment and finds that the family home has completely vanished, he sets out to find his home and to discover who he really is.

Hi all, yes this was a competition and we entered it. YOu had to come up with the first 15 pages. We may get back into it. I'd love to see what you do with it Alex. Good luck.

Hi alexmoreno

Does the soldier have a flaw/weakness? Something to overcome? (apart from finding his family)
e.g did he finish his tour or was he sent home on leave or discharged (reason behind self discovery?)

R
Cheers! Yes, I agree with being lean with the words. Great job...
AM