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Based on your response to Odie, I think you should try and incorporate the way the husband died seeing as it's integral to the twist: after an unexpected suicide, a troubled mother...
Jonathon, a couple of questions please:
- Why is the mother troubled? Does she suffer from drug abuse, alcoholism, spousal abuse?
- Why is the family dysfunctional? They were like this before he died, and they did not know about the infidelity ? what is the main reason?
- What is the most damaging devasting secret? Another family shows up to the funeral with ties to the mob? If its a bunch of bad dad stuff, not sure it adds to your logline.
Example:
After being suddenly widowed by her abusive husband, an XXX mother must ?