by kalinthecelloboy · Initiate · 60 pts
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The visual for guilt is his curse, or rather his power to see it, I do not know if it is relevant but it is a kind of leprosy that grows at times because of his bad actions, eventually, it is known that the curse is the fault of the Supreme Leader.
All those who are unrepentant or aware of their wrongdoings cannot see the stains on their bodies, just like the protagonist, until he finds the magic sword.
Also, sorry if my English is not understood very well.
Film is a visual medium Every element in a logline must refer to a person, place, event, or thing, that can be visualized on the screen. What is the visual for guilt ? What does it look like?
Loglines are not about internal conflicts or subjective issues. Loglines are about external conflicts in the struggle to obtain objective goals.
Thank you so much for your answer! It helped me a lot, and good points, I'll consider them :D
Thank you very much for answering!
You are absolutely right, in fact, the supreme leader is very powerful, and although he is strong in the sense that he also uses a type of "magic" and has an army, what he uses the most is his intelligent mind to deceive.
He would deceive the protagonist by telling him that he cannot be redeemed from his sins because he has failed the one who can redeem him and free him from his curse, and this is the protagonist's internal conflict. Yet throughout his journey he will realize that it is not about being perfect or sinless, but rather about his desire to change and live for the good, that would somehow be his true liberation.
The powers of the supreme leader and his army are their last option, that is to say, that when one of those who lived under their dominions refuse to return to their city and obey after everything they are told they are ruthlessly destroyed either by them or by ordinary citizens.
Very interesting ideas! I will take them into account :)
Possible title: "Awry"
