When a young woman finds out she is a prototype for factory-made humans she needs to run away from her creators who has decided to erase her due to production errors.

Hello Stella,

I assume that your logline is not about Ex Machina (Ava is not the prototype of an android series) and that your hero could be as well Rachael in Blade Runner than Ava in Ex Machina.

IMO:
- when discovering she's a prototype is a good inciting in cident, enough to make the story start. She can learn about her fate later in the setup, and the reason why even later.
- "A young woman" is enough. No?need of more details about your hero as we also know the most important: she's the prototype of?an android series.
- "production errors" is enough also.

Try something like this :

"When discovering she's the prototype of an android line, a young woman must escape her creators who decided to erase her due to production defects."

Best.

Is this a logline? that belongs in the?"Classics" section, for the movie?"Ex Machina"???? Please clarify. If it's not about "Ex Machina" -- that's the problem: the concept is too similar to the movie.

Is this a logline? that belongs in the?"Classics" section, for the movie?"Ex Machina"???? Please clarify. If it's not about "Ex Machina" -- that's the problem: the concept is too similar to the movie.