When an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter exacts his revenge on those responsible, he must rescue an innocent life to destroy a demon from his own mind made flesh.

Maybe I just need a title change, because at the current rate of people who "don't get" how he can be part man / part foetal matter, I'm starting to think people are losing their imaginations.

The otherworldly stuff has been left out for now, for now he's a guy disfigured trying to protect his daughter's life, I make that work, then I try to stuff everything else in later.

So far it's working.

I'll be the first to say the Foetal thing confused the hell outta me...What about this?

"After a string of attacks on an abortion clinic mutilate a doctor and leave several of his patients dead- he sets out for revenge; only to learn their new target is his pregnant daughter."

Which- I don't know why the anti abortionist would attack a pregnant woman but I don't understand a lot of things about all of that.

You seemed to have otherworldly aspects in your original post...Not sure how that is in your story so I didn't feel comfortable trying to shoehorn it in here.

I originally went with part-abortion, but somebody didn't understand what that meant. I can always hope potential readers are smarter than that guy.

I'll probably go back to 'part-abortion' and either they're grossed out by it or not, which is better than being confused.

At least then they might be interested enough in reading a treatment.

Still, minor tweaking to the logline needs to be done, but I think I'm there story-wise...