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I think both those logline tries add a new element, (That the pope is just a puppet) without really increasing the word count. Both would work.
Yes, this logline is more to the point. How about this:
"When IS conquers the world, a conclave of cardinals send a puppet Pope back in time to assassinate IS future leaders and prevent a religious catastrophe.?
or simply this:
When ISIS conquers the world, a puppet Pope must travel back in time to assassinate their future leaders and prevent a religious catastrophe.?
What do you think?
"When ISIS conquers the world, the Pope must travel back in time to assassinate their future leaders to prevent the coming religious catastrophe."
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