When her criminal partner is murdered by her boss, a two-bit thief must infiltrate the ranks of his operation and take her revenge.

by svasta · Initiate · 65 pts June 22, 2022 11 views

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Tackles with grief and the passage of time.

Updated: When a two-bit thief’s criminal partner is murdered by her boss, she must infiltrate the ranks of his operation and take her revenge.

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LachieM · Logliner · 110 pts June 22, 2022

Hey Sam!

I'm sure you've got a clear idea of what this story will be, but the logline is a little vague. What line of business are they in? Who actually is the protagonist/how would you describe her? Why MUST she take revenge and not go to the authorities?

It sounds like a very promising idea that I'm sure you'll polish up very nicely!

- Lachie

When her criminal partner is murdered by her boss, a two-bit thief must infiltrate the ranks of his operation and take her revenge.

1 review

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