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So I see the MC as the Son so why not. "The wealthy heir" or " A rich heroin addict must kick his habit with the help of Jo5hu4.... I suppose the Inciting incident must be where he crosses the line from just destroying his life to almost/destroying someone else's. because it sounds like he has been an addict before we meet him. That also makes for a hard character to like.
Me too I don't get it. I would say : "An introvert software engeneer delegates the A.I. he's working on to deal with his son's drug abuse, only to find his son needs a father more that a software." Is that more or less what you mean ?
A confusing logline - perhaps due to some grammar used. Your current logline, the word 'evolves' should be 'involves'??
I see the MC as the father?? He tries to help his son (without personal involvement...too busy etc) and that is the backfire?
A wealthy CEO purchases the A.I unit J05HU4 to help his heroin addicted son but learns too late that A.I can be manipulated even more effectively than a Father.
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