When three Cambridge students discover they’ve stolen the hope diamond and sold it to a French businessman while being high, they travel to Paris to steal it back before exhibition day.

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We’re going to Paris

18 reviews

Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat · Mentor · 2,620 pts

Hi Adele93

I like your story!

Maybe you can suggest the romance by qualifiying your french businessman (single, handsome,...) or via an other way.

I prefer this writing:
"When three students realize they've stolen a 25-million diamond and sold it to a French businessman after a wild University party, they must steal it back before the exhibition day to avoid emprisonment."

Adele93 · Penpusher · 175 pts

What about this one: "After a wild university party, three students realize they've stolen a 25-million diamond and sold it to a French businessman. To avoid imprisonment they must steal it back before the exhibition day. "

Adele93 · Penpusher · 175 pts

Thanks for your reaction, Richiev!

"Dude, where's my car" reminds me of "Hangover"

While in those two stories the characters don't know WHERE something is, in my story they do, they just have to get it back... and it's not that easy :)

The characters are going to be a bit odd, yes, I mean, it's funny to see how three different personalities will react to the situation.