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Thanks Nicholas,
I appericate the feedback.
Hi,
It's not perfect but how about something along the lines of:
Post World War III, an imprisoned defective soldier is forced to lead a team to the Earths surface to determine if it is safe for those who remain below ground to resurface before their limited air supplies run out.
This way you have a flawed character - he deserted the army and now must repent
You have a ticking clock - air below ground is running out
No doubt there will be conflict on the surface.
Good luck
I like the idea, All I would say is that it would need to be a bit shorter.
Good Luck
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