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A superhuman woman, that is expected to be a savior of the futuristic world with no energy, needs to be saved by a looser fanboy- though not from danger outside, but rather from her self. Note: This is actually meant for comics(manga) script. Target audience is Y/A. Genre is sci-fi action/drama.
Hello! Well in the original outline of the story he was the lead character, but it did not worked for me, since his growth arc, which is mostly external, felt less important then hers- which is internal. Also, I thought that the flaw of the heroin is that "she is expected to be hero", but she is notRead more
Hello! Well in the original outline of the story he was the lead character, but it did not worked for me, since his growth arc, which is mostly external, felt less important then hers- which is internal.
See lessAlso, I thought that the flaw of the heroin is that “she is expected to be hero”, but she is not yet. And all eyes of the world are on her. For inciting incident- that will need some work to put in the logline, since its not that easy to describe it shortly and effectively, probably will even rewrite this part of outline to make it work- and make it clearer!
I will try reassemble and post again.
Thank you guys for help!