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Evan was once heralded as a front page success story for his popular smartphone game, ?Cat Pipe?. But ten years later, he finds himself living in unemployed obscurity with his slacker best friend and ?artist? in residence, Andy. What goes up must come down. Way down.
Thank you for the feedback! I will post a new version with corrections. This is for a TV comedy series, and each episode is a self-contained story arc. Should I pitch the pilot's plot in the logline? I've found conflicting information on that aspect. To answer you questions: -It is about what happenRead more
Thank you for the feedback! I will post a new version with corrections.
This is for a TV comedy series, and each episode is a self-contained story arc. Should I pitch the pilot’s plot in the logline? I’ve found conflicting information on that aspect.
To answer you questions:
-It is about what happens after his fall from grace. I will clarify that, thanks.
See less-Evan is in financial ruin and he and Andy must take on a series of unreliable roommates to get by. There is a new roommate for each season of the show.
-The first season roommate, Rick, accidentally provokes a notorious hacker during an online racing game; which results in Evan’s credit cards being charged with a series of ‘pre-authorized’ rentals that arrive at their front door. Evan must get the charges reversed and use his rusty skills to stop the hacker from ruining him for good. That is the essential plot of the pilot.
Evan was once heralded as a front page success story for his popular smartphone game, ?Cat Pipe?. But ten years later, he finds himself living in unemployed obscurity with his slacker best friend and ?artist? in residence, Andy. What goes up must come down. Way down.
Thank you for the feedback! I will post a new version with corrections. This is for a TV comedy series, and each episode is a self-contained story arc. Should I pitch the pilot's plot in the logline? I've found conflicting information on that aspect. To answer you questions: -It is about what happenRead more
Thank you for the feedback! I will post a new version with corrections.
This is for a TV comedy series, and each episode is a self-contained story arc. Should I pitch the pilot’s plot in the logline? I’ve found conflicting information on that aspect.
To answer you questions:
-It is about what happens after his fall from grace. I will clarify that, thanks.
See less-Evan is in financial ruin and he and Andy must take on a series of unreliable roommates to get by. There is a new roommate for each season of the show.
-The first season roommate, Rick, accidentally provokes a notorious hacker during an online racing game; which results in Evan’s credit cards being charged with a series of ‘pre-authorized’ rentals that arrive at their front door. Evan must get the charges reversed and use his rusty skills to stop the hacker from ruining him for good. That is the essential plot of the pilot.
A group of city guys must transform and go undercover to hunt down the murderer of their transgender friend.
I think the logline itself is fine, but I believe 'transgendered' is appropriate for this phrasing. It sounds unnatural to me as a gay lady to leave out the 'd'. I think you may want to tip your hand a little more in regards to the 'transform' part, but since I don't know what is behind door numberRead more
I think the logline itself is fine, but I believe ‘transgendered’ is appropriate for this phrasing. It sounds unnatural to me as a gay lady to leave out the ‘d’.
I think you may want to tip your hand a little more in regards to the ‘transform’ part, but since I don’t know what is behind door number one it’s hard to say.
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