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  1. Posted: August 8, 2012In: Public

    Peter has an over active imagination and takes it upon himself to seek out and banish the beasts that he hears his mother describe, only to discover that in fact they are not beasts at all.

    alain_alfaro
    Added an answer on August 9, 2012 at 5:53 am

    Sounds like something that can be very psychological and fantastic at the same time. I would also like to know what age Peter is. Is he an adult who is still attached to mother. Or a child? That would help set the tone. I would also pull the mother describing beasts thing earlier in the logline. GooRead more

    Sounds like something that can be very psychological and fantastic at the same time. I would also like to know what age Peter is. Is he an adult who is still attached to mother. Or a child? That would help set the tone. I would also pull the mother describing beasts thing earlier in the logline.

    Good job

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  2. Posted: July 20, 2012In: Public

    FLASH

    alain_alfaro
    Added an answer on July 24, 2012 at 1:22 am

    Yeah, this def sounds cool. Nice opportunity to show the "freedoms" that the grandfather fought for and the grandson is living in. Can raise an interesting conversation.

    Yeah, this def sounds cool. Nice opportunity to show the “freedoms” that the grandfather fought for and the grandson is living in. Can raise an interesting conversation.

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  3. Posted: July 24, 2012In: Public

    ?Two uninspired and perpetually high film students document the final days of an emotionally destroyed detective, believing his demise will give their career the kick-start it needs.?

    alain_alfaro
    Added an answer on July 24, 2012 at 1:15 am

    Sounds like an unintentional detective story that can become some kind of mystery for the film students. What's missing for me in this log line is what do they get themselves into. What is the challenge that they encounter? Sounds great otherwise!

    Sounds like an unintentional detective story that can become some kind of mystery for the film students. What’s missing for me in this log line is what do they get themselves into. What is the challenge that they encounter?

    Sounds great otherwise!

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