1. Posted: July 12, 2012In:

    When a young, money-driven, surrogate mother finds out that both of the biological parents were killed in an accident, she is left to decide wether or not to keep the child.

    alain_alfaro

    For sure sounds like a character driven piece. I wonder if the synopsis can or should touch on the surrogate mother's emotional attachment. Is the child a burden to her money driven goals? Definitely a nice premise for a movie, but I wonder if the synopsis is vague at the moment.

    For sure sounds like a character driven piece. I wonder if the synopsis can or should touch on the surrogate mother’s emotional attachment. Is the child a burden to her money driven goals? Definitely a nice premise for a movie, but I wonder if the synopsis is vague at the moment.

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  2. Posted: July 13, 2012In:

    Two friends have a serendipitous encounter with a Caribbean musician, in one of London's many parks, only to discover the bitter sweet truth about life through the lyricism of their new found friend.

    alain_alfaro

    Sounds like a nice homage to the powers of music. I'm curious to see where this goes and what the struggles are. Good start!

    Sounds like a nice homage to the powers of music. I’m curious to see where this goes and what the struggles are. Good start!

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  3. Posted: July 12, 2012In:

    After a young archeologist discovers an ancient tablet, a group of immortal assassins hunt him down. The Guardian stands in their way.

    alain_alfaro

    This reminds me of Indiana Jones or The Mummy. Could be lots of fun to watch, very worldy and historical too. I'm wondering, who is The Guardian? That part is a bit ambigous to me at the moment. But, good job, sounds like a lotta fun.

    This reminds me of Indiana Jones or The Mummy. Could be lots of fun to watch, very worldy and historical too. I’m wondering, who is The Guardian? That part is a bit ambigous to me at the moment. But, good job, sounds like a lotta fun.

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