1. Posted: June 27, 2022In:

    When her family unexpectedly comes back into her life after years of estrangement, a young woman must confront her past and the people who will never accept her for who she is.

    Alan H. Jordan Penpusher

    Perhaps you'll like this. It gives me an idea that she's old enough to have life experience and (for me) adds an element of suspense. A twenty-something must confront her past and the people who will never accept her for who she is when, after years of estrangement, family members come back into herRead more

    Perhaps you’ll like this. It gives me an idea that she’s old enough to have life experience and (for me) adds an element of suspense.

    A twenty-something must confront her past and the people who will never accept her for who she is when, after years of estrangement, family members come back into her life, one-by-one.

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  2. Posted: June 28, 2022In:

    After his father’s passing, a boy must find a way to bring the sparkle back into his life.

    Alan H. Jordan Penpusher

    Thanks Ben. I made a few changes to the story. Please see my response to Richiev, above.

    Thanks Ben. I made a few changes to the story. Please see my response to Richiev, above.

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  3. Posted: June 28, 2022In:

    After his father’s passing, a boy must find a way to bring the sparkle back into his life.

    Alan H. Jordan Penpusher

    Thanks for hanging in there with me Richiev. For this story, and the last one.

    Thanks for hanging in there with me Richiev. For this story, and the last one.

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