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I'm not sure what actually happens in the movie? You've described two events that happen early - his lover goes missing and his father gets released from prison. But what is the arc of the film? Is the detective trying to find out where is lover is? Is he trying to get revenge on his father? dpg makRead more
I’m not sure what actually happens in the movie? You’ve described two events that happen early – his lover goes missing and his father gets released from prison. But what is the arc of the film? Is the detective trying to find out where is lover is? Is he trying to get revenge on his father? dpg makes the same point as I do – what actually happens in the story?
See lessA mafia wife assumes control and seeks revenge for her husband?s murder, and when she discovers her daughter is pregnant by the son of the charming, handsome killer, she pursues a different path that forces her to come to terms with her own blossoming feelings for him.
I agree with dpg, the storyline of the daughter isn't as crucial in a logline. It's more of a plot twist element that belongs in a synopsis when you have more time to give it the attention it deserves.
I agree with dpg, the storyline of the daughter isn’t as crucial in a logline. It’s more of a plot twist element that belongs in a synopsis when you have more time to give it the attention it deserves.
See lessAn independent twenty-something woman buys her first house, only to have her father show up on her doorstep announcing that he's left her mother and is moving in.
Hi Isabelle! I was wondering about that too (the unfinished nature of the logline), hence why I put it up in this incarnation. I suppose this is more of a "premise" logline, in that it explains the hook. Each season of the show would have its own logline - and then each episode their own logline agaRead more
Hi Isabelle! I was wondering about that too (the unfinished nature of the logline), hence why I put it up in this incarnation. I suppose this is more of a “premise” logline, in that it explains the hook. Each season of the show would have its own logline – and then each episode their own logline again!
I put twenty-something as I wanted to highlight the fact that she’s at that point in her life where she’s starting to get her act together – which is precisely when her father and mother’s lives start to fall apart. ‘Young’ is a bit more ambiguous, although I might play around with it anyway because the more I think about it the more I like it!
Thanks!
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