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  1. Posted: July 30, 2014In: Public

    An ambitious Ukrainian girl moves to NYC from Brighton beach to escape her conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a freelance journalist, everything goes better than expected until she discovers that she has less than a year to live…

    anazhur
    Added an answer on July 31, 2014 at 3:22 am

    I am so happy this website exists. I am very very grateful for your help guys! It really helps me a lot! >> Thank you a lot Richiev! Your advice is very helpful! Should I be more precise about why exactly she goes to NYC? What is her goal? I will be back with some new ideas. >>dpg Your iRead more

    I am so happy this website exists. I am very very grateful for your help guys! It really helps me a lot!

    >> Thank you a lot Richiev! Your advice is very helpful!
    Should I be more precise about why exactly she goes to NYC? What is her goal?
    I will be back with some new ideas.

    >>dpg
    Your idea is great! That’s what I thought about initially, but stopped to go into this direction because I realized that it will be very hard to execute it. Most likely this will be an independent film (hopefully), so it will be very hard to finance this project.
    But at the same time I would LOVE to write about it! Maybe I should just go for it…

    Hmm, I will definitely come back with a new logline.

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  2. Posted: July 30, 2014In: Public

    An ambitious Ukrainian girl moves to NYC from Brighton beach to escape her conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a freelance journalist, everything goes better than expected until she discovers that she has less than a year to live…

    anazhur
    Added an answer on July 31, 2014 at 3:22 am

    I am so happy this website exists. I am very very grateful for your help guys! It really helps me a lot! >> Thank you a lot Richiev! Your advice is very helpful! Should I be more precise about why exactly she goes to NYC? What is her goal? I will be back with some new ideas. >>dpg Your iRead more

    I am so happy this website exists. I am very very grateful for your help guys! It really helps me a lot!

    >> Thank you a lot Richiev! Your advice is very helpful!
    Should I be more precise about why exactly she goes to NYC? What is her goal?
    I will be back with some new ideas.

    >>dpg
    Your idea is great! That’s what I thought about initially, but stopped to go into this direction because I realized that it will be very hard to execute it. Most likely this will be an independent film (hopefully), so it will be very hard to finance this project.
    But at the same time I would LOVE to write about it! Maybe I should just go for it…

    Hmm, I will definitely come back with a new logline.

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  3. Posted: July 30, 2014In: Public

    An ambitious Ukrainian girl moves to NYC from Brighton beach to escape her conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a freelance journalist, everything goes better than expected until she discovers that she has less than a year to live…

    anazhur
    Added an answer on July 30, 2014 at 11:46 am

    Thank you dpg! Your answer was very very helpful. I just realized that my initial idea is not going to work, the story will be overcharged and confusing. So I decided to follow your advice and I have rewritten my logline: When an ordinary college girl discovers that she has less than a year to live,Read more

    Thank you dpg! Your answer was very very helpful. I just realized that my initial idea is not going to work, the story will be overcharged and confusing.

    So I decided to follow your advice and I have rewritten my logline:

    When an ordinary college girl discovers that she has less than a year to live, she decides to start a new life by moving to NYC to escape her dysfunctional conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a successful journalist.

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