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An ambitious Ukrainian girl moves to NYC from Brighton beach to escape her conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a freelance journalist, everything goes better than expected until she discovers that she has less than a year to live…
Thank you dpg! Your answer was very very helpful. I just realized that my initial idea is not going to work, the story will be overcharged and confusing. So I decided to follow your advice and I have rewritten my logline: When an ordinary college girl discovers that she has less than a year to live,Read more
Thank you dpg! Your answer was very very helpful. I just realized that my initial idea is not going to work, the story will be overcharged and confusing.
So I decided to follow your advice and I have rewritten my logline:
When an ordinary college girl discovers that she has less than a year to live, she decides to start a new life by moving to NYC to escape her dysfunctional conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a successful journalist.
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Hmm, very interesting point. I would have to make changes to my storyline, but it would definitely make more sense. Thanks a lot for your help! I will think about it.
Hmm, very interesting point. I would have to make changes to my storyline, but it would definitely make more sense. Thanks a lot for your help! I will think about it.
See lessAn ambitious Ukrainian girl moves to NYC from Brighton beach to escape her conservative family and to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a freelance journalist, everything goes better than expected until she discovers that she has less than a year to live…
Hmm, very interesting point. I would have to make changes to my storyline, but it would definitely make more sense. Thanks a lot for your help! I will think about it.
Hmm, very interesting point. I would have to make changes to my storyline, but it would definitely make more sense. Thanks a lot for your help! I will think about it.
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