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In the claustrophobia of a haunted flat, an immature voodoo sorcerer makes a terrible choice when he calls upon his dark gods to seek revenge for a broken heart.
Hi. Thanks a lot for you comments. To be honest, I'm finding this really hard. Every time I write this, I keep hearing a deep voiced narrator in my head reading it out. Basically, the guy gets his heart broken, he casts a spell on his ex which brings evil into his house that he has to overcome, andRead more
Hi. Thanks a lot for you comments. To be honest, I’m finding this really hard. Every time I write this, I keep hearing a deep voiced narrator in my head reading it out. Basically, the guy gets his heart broken, he casts a spell on his ex which brings evil into his house that he has to overcome, and the only way he can do that is by manning up and accepting that the breakup was his fault in the first place AND repent for her lashing out at the girl. he’ll lose his soul otherwise. But I can’t seem to sum that up.
See lessWhen their conversion to goodness is discovered by Lucifer, a young devil and his converted, ‘goody two shoes’ family flee Hell for the suburban life of Canberra where the boy finds that being a horned, red-skinned devil and ‘fitting in’ to Earthly life is not as easy as he thought.
I like the idea of a whole family being forced to leave their culture because of differing ideologies. I can see there being family tension as well because one of the kids may be a traditionalist. From the title though, it sounds like a straight comedy. Do you think a bit more pathos and tragedy migRead more
I like the idea of a whole family being forced to leave their culture because of differing ideologies. I can see there being family tension as well because one of the kids may be a traditionalist. From the title though, it sounds like a straight comedy. Do you think a bit more pathos and tragedy might work. Maybe a betrayal by one of the family members? I also like fish out of water stories as well. I think it’s a great idea.
See lessThe actual logline is a bit choppy though and I find it hard to follow the point of it. I get that there’s a family in hiding from their community leader and they’ve run away because they don’t fit in, and i kind of see that a lot of the story would be around fitting in the new community they’ve run to and getting over misconceptions about what they consider the new community to be.
I can see possible themes of perceptions of theology and dogma, ethical and moral themes, the evolving attitudes to sin, perhaps even the anachronistic meeting the modern. I think there are loads of really interesting and fun things to explore here
When their conversion to goodness is discovered by Lucifer, a young devil and his converted, ‘goody two shoes’ family flee Hell for the suburban life of Canberra where the boy finds that being a horned, red-skinned devil and ‘fitting in’ to Earthly life is not as easy as he thought.
You're mistaken about the your point on how people view hell. There have been many different takes on the Christian version of hell, especially as much of the western world is exposed to very diverse cultures nowadays. Look at two differing themes from two well known theologians - Milton and CS LewiRead more
You’re mistaken about the your point on how people view hell. There have been many different takes on the Christian version of hell, especially as much of the western world is exposed to very diverse cultures nowadays. Look at two differing themes from two well known theologians – Milton and CS Lewis. Look at how different Paradise lost and screwtape letters are.
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