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  1. Posted: November 21, 2012In: Public

    When a Fire-Demon from his parents past kidnaps his fianc?, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artefact and uncover its power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child.

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    Added an answer on September 25, 2012 at 12:26 pm

    Still doesn't seem right... The Demon is from his past (killed his parents) When a Fire-Demon kidnaps his fiance, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artifact and uncover it's power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child. When a timid hydrologist's fiance is kidnapped and held ransRead more

    Still doesn’t seem right…

    The Demon is from his past (killed his parents)

    When a Fire-Demon kidnaps his fiance, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artifact and uncover it’s power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child.

    When a timid hydrologist’s fiance is kidnapped and held ransom, he must locate a mythical artifact and uncover it’s power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child.

    any suggestions?

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  2. Posted: November 21, 2012In: Public

    When a Fire-Demon from his parents past kidnaps his fianc?, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artefact and uncover its power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 24, 2012 at 3:55 pm

    Revised: "When a Fire-Demon from his past kidnaps his fianc?, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artefact and uncover its power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child

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    “When a Fire-Demon from his past kidnaps his fianc?, a timid hydrologist must locate a mythical artefact and uncover its power before the Devil kills his lover and unborn child

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