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On a dare a naive orphan tries to get aboard a legendary space ship, and back to the orphanage before dinner with a "souvenir" from the ship or the two bullies who made the dare will smash his model space ship.
Hey Adam love the idea. Logline is a little long. Try to go for 27 -25 words, the limit is more of a guide anymore than 27 words you'll need to edit... (Hard, I know) My spin... When a naive orphan's replica model is stolen by two obnoxious bullies, he must board the real space ship, collect a souveRead more
Hey Adam
love the idea. Logline is a little long. Try to go for 27 -25 words, the limit is more of a guide anymore than 27 words you’ll need to edit… (Hard, I know)
My spin…
When a naive orphan’s replica model is stolen by two obnoxious bullies, he must board the real space ship, collect a souvenir and return before dinner or loose his prized possession forever. (30 Words)
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with revenge it doesn't have to be straight out and kill, an eye for an eye.He could torment him emotionally, dating his daughter and making her hate her father etc. That would be worse than death...
with revenge it doesn’t have to be straight out and kill, an eye for an eye.He could torment him emotionally, dating his daughter and making her hate her father etc. That would be worse than death…
See lessAn obsessed vigilante has to face the errors of his past when the son of one of his victims infiltrates his gang…
An obsessed vigilante has to face the errors of his past when the son of one of his victims infiltrates his gang and seeks revenge on his family
An obsessed vigilante has to face the errors of his past when the son of one of his victims infiltrates his gang and seeks revenge on his family
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