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  1. Posted: September 9, 2012

    As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. With the true killer desperate to expose the existence of werewolves, the detective must accept the beast within… or be lost to the wolf forever.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 10, 2012 at 1:01 pm

    But in saying that, mine is long also. Hope the input helps either way.

    But in saying that, mine is long also. Hope the input helps either way.

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  2. Posted: September 9, 2012

    As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. With the true killer desperate to expose the existence of werewolves, the detective must accept the beast within… or be lost to the wolf forever.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 10, 2012 at 12:55 pm

    To me the logline is a little wordy, refers to the beast/wolf within in twice... When a cursed detective is framed by a killer who's desire is to expose the existence of werewolves, he must clear his name, accept the wolf within or be lost to the beast forever. As a cursed detective struggles with tRead more

    To me the logline is a little wordy, refers to the beast/wolf within in twice…

    When a cursed detective is framed by a killer who’s desire is to expose the existence of werewolves, he must clear his name, accept the wolf within or be lost to the beast forever.

    As a cursed detective struggles with the beast within, the masquerade of his kind is threaten when he’s framed for murder, the detective must clear his name, accept the wolf or be lost to it forever.

    Something like that but better! 🙂
    Best of luck.

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2012In: Examples

    When a high school chemistry teacher struggling financially is diagnosed with cancer and health insurance wont cover the cost of treatment, he turns to cooking and selling crystal meth to secure a financial future for his family

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    Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 4:36 pm

    My original logline is long. just refering to the above logline "he turns to cooking crystal meth" doesn't sit right, sounds like he's turning to drugs and not saying why... When a chemistry teacher struggling financially is diagnosed with cancer and health insurance wont cover treatment, he turns tRead more

    My original logline is long.
    just refering to the above logline “he turns to cooking crystal meth” doesn’t sit right, sounds like he’s turning to drugs and not saying why…

    When a chemistry teacher struggling financially is diagnosed with cancer and health insurance wont cover treatment, he turns to cooking and selling crystal meth to secure his family’s future

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