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  1. Posted: September 7, 2012In: Public

    Years after his son?s murder, a bitter gangster-vigilante trains a new recruit, but the young undercover commando is there to take the gang boss down?

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 8:54 am

    "Years after his son?s murder, a bitter gangster-vigilante trains a new recruit, but the young undercover cop is there to take the gang boss down" The young undercover cop I believe works better, specially if he is following in his fathers footsteps (cop) is he just doing his job or is he seeking reRead more

    “Years after his son?s murder, a bitter gangster-vigilante trains a new recruit, but the young undercover cop is there to take the gang boss down”

    The young undercover cop I believe works better, specially if he is following in his fathers footsteps (cop) is he just doing his job or is he seeking revenge on the gang leader?

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  2. Posted: September 2, 2012In: Public

    Struggling to relate to others, a pet psychiatrist spins out of control thanks to his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 8:21 am

    Hey Jim can't wait for W.D! Regarding your revised logline, the ending to me looks like its all on the "high school crush and the obsessed cat owner to rescue the hero's practice and self worth", The hero is the one that needs to save his practice and discover self worth, relying on his friends to dRead more

    Hey Jim

    can’t wait for W.D!

    Regarding your revised logline, the ending to me looks like its all on the “high school crush and the obsessed cat owner to rescue the hero’s practice and self worth”,
    The hero is the one that needs to save his practice and discover self worth, relying on his friends to do that is kinda missing the point of the hero’s journey, he would’ve learnt nothing.

    hope that didn’t come across harsh.

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2012In: Public

    Years after his son?s murder, the leader of a vigilante gang trains a new recruit to take over his ?work?, but the young AWOL commando is on a mission of his own.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 6, 2012 at 9:40 pm

    I have some here, I'll lend you a pair.

    I have some here, I’ll lend you a pair.

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