1. Posted: October 25, 2013In:

    After infected by a werewolf, a tormented Farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the Mayor

    Andrew Bates Logliner

    Thanks all for the feedback, Richiev I believe you have hit it on the head, thankyou! Revised "After infected by a werewolf, a tormented Farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the Mayor"

    Thanks all for the feedback,

    Richiev I believe you have hit it on the head, thankyou!

    Revised

    “After infected by a werewolf, a tormented Farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the Mayor”

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  2. Posted: July 3, 2013In:

    After reading a page from a spell book an incorrigible boy discovers a cursed princess trapped in a tree in his backyard. He must break the spell and save his father from his new girlfriend, the Witch.

    Andrew Bates Logliner

    Hi Tony Nice work, thanks for the feedback.

    Hi Tony
    Nice work, thanks for the feedback.

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  3. Posted: July 3, 2013In:

    In order to settle a large debt, an exiled hit man agrees to a dangerous but lucrative assassination in Vegas, where nothing goes to plan after he realizes he’s been conned by his estranged brother-in-law.

    Andrew Bates Logliner

    "With a large debt on his head, an(something)assassin agrees to lucrative hit in Vegas. Things fall apart when he discovers that the mark is his estranged brother" Probably not your story, but you get the idea. Best of luck!

    “With a large debt on his head, an(something)assassin agrees to lucrative hit in Vegas. Things fall apart when he discovers that the mark is his estranged brother”

    Probably not your story, but you get the idea. Best of luck!

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