1. Posted: July 3, 2013In:

    After reading a page from a spell book an incorrigible boy discovers a cursed princess trapped in a tree in his backyard. He must break the spell and save his father from his new girlfriend, the Witch.

    Andrew Bates Logliner

    Sigh...this is getting a little frustrating. I can see it, just have trouble finding the correct words that work. I'll sleep on in for a week or so and come back hopefully with some new ideas, I appreciate all the feedback, thank-you.

    Sigh…this is getting a little frustrating. I can see it, just have trouble finding the correct words that work.
    I’ll sleep on in for a week or so and come back hopefully with some new ideas, I appreciate all the feedback, thank-you.

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  2. Posted: July 3, 2013In:

    After reading a page from a spell book an incorrigible boy discovers a cursed princess trapped in a tree in his backyard. He must break the spell and save his father from his new girlfriend, the Witch.

    Andrew Bates Logliner

    I've changed a few things, the new logline is at the top...a bit long though :(

    I’ve changed a few things, the new logline is at the top…a bit long though 🙁

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  3. Posted: July 3, 2013In:

    Santa F

    Andrew Bates Logliner

    The reason for this website is to write, post and critique loglines, not completed stories.

    The reason for this website is to write, post and critique loglines, not completed stories.

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