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  1. Posted: July 3, 2013In: Public

    After reading a page from a spell book an incorrigible boy discovers a cursed princess trapped in a tree in his backyard. He must break the spell and save his father from his new girlfriend, the Witch.

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    Added an answer on July 3, 2013 at 3:51 pm

    When a incorrigible boy finds a princess trapped in a tree. He must break the spell before the Witch is elected Mayor and bulldozes the park.

    When a incorrigible boy finds a princess trapped in a tree.
    He must break the spell before the Witch is elected Mayor and bulldozes the park.

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  2. Posted: July 3, 2013In: Public

    A determined boy separated from his newfound sweetheart must cross the Bass Strait and come to the rescue before Tasmania is destroyed by rising sea levels.

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    A boy must overcome his fear of water and cross the Bass Strait to rescue his sweetheart before Tasmania is destroyed by rising sea levels.

    A boy must overcome his fear of water and cross the Bass Strait to rescue his sweetheart before Tasmania is destroyed by rising sea levels.

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  3. Posted: July 3, 2013In: Public

    After reading a page from a spell book an incorrigible boy discovers a cursed princess trapped in a tree in his backyard. He must break the spell and save his father from his new girlfriend, the Witch.

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    Added an answer on July 3, 2013 at 2:40 pm

    Revised "When an incorrigible boy discovers a princess trapped in a tree by a witch's curse. He must break the spell before the park is bulldozed by the spellbinder, the mayor" or "After a princess is trapped in a tree by a witch's curse. Her life is in the hands of a troubled boy who must break theRead more

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    “When an incorrigible boy discovers a princess trapped in a tree by a witch’s curse. He must break the spell before the park is bulldozed by the spellbinder, the mayor”

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    “After a princess is trapped in a tree by a witch’s curse. Her life is in the hands of a troubled boy who must break the spell before the park is bulldozed for a Mall.

    I’m having a little trouble trying to incorporate that the hero is the only one that can see her…

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