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A debilitated wildlife ranger discovers mutilated human remains, survives a Lycanthrope attack. He struggles to find safety from a group of sadistic werewolf hunters hot on his tail
Revised "A lone tracker preserving wildlife survives a werewolf attack. No cure and a new moon rising, the sadistic poachers on his tail have all the answers" What do you think?
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“A lone tracker preserving wildlife survives a werewolf attack. No cure and a new moon rising, the sadistic poachers on his tail have all the answers”
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See lessIn a distant future China has assumed control of most of the world by capitalizing on our sun disappearing. However, A young scientist discovers that the sun problem can be solved, thus initiating another World War.
great idea, Gman A think its a little to wordy. being sci fi - just saying "disappearing" seems vague. Are Aliens involved? Is our solar system dying? etc. If the sun is dying or about to die, tell us. No need to go into sci fi detail in the logline, leave that for the script. Does your scientist haRead more
great idea, Gman
A think its a little to wordy.
being sci fi – just saying “disappearing” seems vague. Are Aliens involved? Is our solar system dying? etc. If the sun is dying or about to die, tell us. No need to go into sci fi detail in the logline, leave that for the script.
Does your scientist have a flaw? Arrogance, loner? etc
Protag- Young scientist
Antag- china (Military leader) or rival scientist selling idea to china
Goal- restore life to sun
Inner Conflict- ? Time? Rival scientist or close friend?
Outer Conflict- battles china, WW3
Irony- ?
Hook- ?
Genre- Sci Fi
play with the words some more. Best of luck.
See lessIntelligent, yet emotionally broken and poor WWI veteran is laughed out of the room when he applies jobs at large banks during the 1920s boom, until he finds a mentor in the head of a near-bankrupt bank who gives him a job and helps him hone his trading skills before the Crash of ?29, when the hero executes a series of very complex trades, designed to take down each of the banks which underestimated him, one by one.
hey myoldfavorite. great idea, nice revenge story. just to much happening. look for 25-28 words. For the hero, focus on one fault not two. russell is right, what happened to make him seek revenge? Banks take his house, illegal activity etc best of luck
hey myoldfavorite.
great idea, nice revenge story. just to much happening.
look for 25-28 words.
For the hero, focus on one fault not two.
russell is right, what happened to make him seek revenge? Banks take his house, illegal activity etc
best of luck
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