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A debilitated wildlife ranger discovers mutilated human remains, survives a Lycanthrope attack. He struggles to find safety from a group of sadistic werewolf hunters hot on his tail
Cheers, myoldfavorite I like it! His name isn't important at this stage. I would like to show what the ranger was doing before the attack / i.i A Character flaw for him to overcome i would like to have irony in the logline, something to hook the reader. To me the hero's profession isn't a major factRead more
Cheers, myoldfavorite
I like it!
His name isn’t important at this stage.
I would like to show what the ranger was doing before the attack / i.i
A Character flaw for him to overcome
i would like to have irony in the logline, something to hook the reader.
To me the hero’s profession isn’t a major factor. The main key is that the forest is like a second home to him. An escape from the world.
Just an idea..
“After discovering a mutilated corpse a detached tracker survives a werewolf attack. He finds himself being pursued by a group of sadistic hunters”
might play with it a bit more.
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A debilitated wildlife ranger discovers mutilated human remains, survives a Lycanthrope attack. He struggles to find safety from a group of sadistic werewolf hunters hot on his tail
Now that you mention it does seem thrown in. I don't want to use the word "werewolf" more than once. I'll have a play around, thanks.
Now that you mention it does seem thrown in.
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A film director, mentally driven to the edge, fires his ego-maniacal narrator, a pixy, who later manipulates his movie for her own personal gain. — or so it would seem.
I like it. Who is the protagonist the Director or the pixie? (if you took away "or so it would seem" at the end, the pixie would def come across at the antagonist) or it could just be me >< I think it's a little busy, maybe shorten it down a little, re word it maybe, see what you come upRead more
I like it.
Who is the protagonist the Director or the pixie? (if you took away “or so it would seem” at the end, the pixie would def come across at the antagonist) or it could just be me ><
I think it's a little busy, maybe shorten it down a little, re word it maybe, see what you come up with.
best of luck.
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