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Jacob has lost faith. When a woman who says she's from the future appears at his door with a grave warning, Jacob must decide whether to believe her or face the consequences.
hey nicholasandrewhalls Irony catches the readers attention. Not all loglines have irony, but most of the good ones do, for example . A lawyer that can not lie (liar liar) a king that can't speak to his people (The kings speach) That is irony. "a future where criminals are arrested before the crimeRead more
hey nicholasandrewhalls
Irony catches the readers attention. Not all loglines have irony, but most of the good ones do, for example .
A lawyer that can not lie (liar liar) a king that can’t speak to his people (The kings speach) That is irony.
“a future where criminals are arrested before the crime occurs, a drug addicted cop struggles on the lam to prove his innocence for a murder he has not yet committed. (Minority Report) Irony.
Jacobs own work turns out to be his down fall? Irony?
Your logline should be in between 25-30 words.
Names and age are irrelevant unless they are relevant to the story.
The protag is a developer. How would you describe him, character-wise? Lonely? obsessive-compulsive? Drug addict? (like Minority Report) Something that he needs to overcome at the end of the story.
“After being warned from a woman claiming to be from the future. A obsessive developer must make the choice to heed her warning or continue his work that may bring the downfall of man”
something like that but better… Hope it helps.
See lessJacob has lost faith. When a woman who says she's from the future appears at his door with a grave warning, Jacob must decide whether to believe her or face the consequences.
I agree with Mdavidson, it is very vague. fill out the elements below, maybe it will make your logline more clearer . Protag- Jacob Antag- ? Goal- heed warning, to survive, to change/learn? Inner - rediscover faith? Outer -? Irony- girl from future is daughter etc? Hook- ? Genre- ? Someone gave me tRead more
I agree with Mdavidson, it is very vague.
fill out the elements below, maybe it will make your logline more clearer
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Protag- Jacob
Antag- ?
Goal- heed warning, to survive, to change/learn?
Inner – rediscover faith?
Outer -?
Irony- girl from future is daughter etc?
Hook- ?
Genre- ?
Someone gave me this info, helps me a lot when doing my logline. Hope this helps you too, best of luck.
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Thanks Paul
Thanks Paul
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