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When a harmless prank and a mystifying homicide collide, two men decide to run from the police to figure out who set them up. Their camaraderie shatters when one ends up in jail and the other one suddenly has a flawless alibi. A relentless detective keeps unravelling the truth behind a remarkably twisted story that keeps on washing up new suspects at every turn.
I agree 100% with what FFF said and the logline that he suggested is really good.
I agree 100% with what FFF said and the logline that he suggested is really good.
See lessWhen a conservative man adjusts to life in a wheelchair, he suddenly finds it difficult to achieve an erection. Snubbed by his busy, self-centered wife, and desperate to reclaim his virility, he must use something he hasn?t in years: porn. (Short Film)
I don't find this to be interesting or unique. ?It's a guy on a wheelchair watching porn. Have you seen the film "The Sessions" about a 38 year's old man in an iron lung who decides that he doesn't want to die a virgin and he hires a professional sex surrogate who has a husband, a house and a son? IRead more
I don’t find this to be interesting or unique. ?It’s a guy on a wheelchair watching porn.
Have you seen the film “The Sessions” about a 38 year’s old man in an iron lung who decides that he doesn’t want to die a virgin and he hires a professional sex surrogate who has a husband, a house and a son? It’s inspired by a true story.
That’s interesting and unique.
Maybe if your main character was a former porno actor or a ladies man with a very active sexual life who has to adapt to the idea that things will never be has they were before and he has to find a new path on his life.
Or maybe if the person who helps him to get his sexual life back was someone that one would not expect to do something like that. Like a nun or a lesbian.
I don’t know. You need to figure out a way to make it more unique and interesting.
See lessAfter his father dies under mysterious circumstances, a young man gets tangled up in an undercover operation against London’s most notorious crime family.
I've been thinking about this logline. Like I said before I don't think this is interesting enough or even much unique. So I'd suggest something like this: "A young man goes undercover and infiltrates London's most notorious crime family to solve the mystery around his father's death." So we have thRead more
I’ve been thinking about this logline.
Like I said before I don’t think this is interesting enough or even much unique.
So I’d suggest something like this:
“A young man goes undercover and infiltrates London’s most notorious crime family to solve the mystery around his father’s death.”
So we have the hero – the young man – his goal – solve the mystery of his father’s death – and we have the villain -?London’s most notorious crime family.
Not bad.
But it can be more interesting and unique. We have seen other undercover young men infiltrating the crime world.
So I suggest something like this:
“A young seminarian drops the seminary and infiltrates London’s most notorious crime family to solve the mystery around his father’s death.”
I think this way the story is more interesting and unique. But if you don’t agree with me I hope that at least you get the point and you’ll try to create an unique twist to your concept.
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