1. Posted: June 26, 2022In:

    An impulsive 14-year-old goes to epic lengths and sparks a national emergency trying to find case of beer to impress his older brother.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Maybe you mean: To impress his older brother, an impulsive teen goes to epic lengths and sparks a national emergency.

    Maybe you mean:
    To impress his older brother, an impulsive teen goes to epic lengths and sparks a national emergency.

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  2. Posted: June 27, 2022In:

    A young boy who has ADD and social awkwardness, meets a coach for a basketball team who decides to train the boy into focusing his disabilities into sport and make him a champion.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi MichaelV, Who is your lead character? Is it the boy or the coach? I suggest you read the formula once again, introduce some context to your readers by including a short synopsis, and re-write your logline. Then we can assist you to achieve your desired logline. Good Luck Ben

    Hi MichaelV,
    Who is your lead character? Is it the boy or the coach? I suggest you read the formula once again, introduce some context to your readers by including a short synopsis, and re-write your logline. Then we can assist you to achieve your desired logline.
    Good Luck
    Ben

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  3. Posted: June 24, 2022In:

    When the mob murders his friend, the cops say it’s a random killing. An Army vet sets out to find the truth and avenge his friend.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hello opqlife, I guess it can be something like this? When the mob murders his friend, an army vet sets out to find the truth and avenge despite cops considering the crime as a random homicide. I hope this helps.

    Hello opqlife,
    I guess it can be something like this?

    When the mob murders his friend, an army vet sets out to find the truth and avenge despite cops considering the crime as a random homicide.

    I hope this helps.

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