1. Posted: June 28, 2022In:

    After his father’s passing, a boy must find a way to bring the sparkle back into his life.

    BenGilani Logliner

    I meant to write: A grieving boy must find a way to bring the sparkle back into his life after losing his father.

    I meant to write:

    A grieving boy must find a way to bring the sparkle back into his life after losing his father.

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  2. Posted: June 28, 2022In:

    After his father’s passing, a boy must find a way to bring the sparkle back into his life.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Maybe something like this? A grieving boy must find a way to bring the sparkle back into his life. I hope this helps.

    Maybe something like this?

    A grieving boy must find a way to bring the sparkle back into his life.

    I hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: June 22, 2022In:

    When an elderly father’s health begins to decline, his middle aged son returns to his small hometown to be closer to him in his final days, only to be confronted by the demons of his family’s past, causing him to re-evaluate his relationship with his father.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Something like this maybe? When a middle-aged man returns home to be with his dying father, he is confronted by the demons of the family’s past and must re-evaluate the relationship with his father. I hope this helps. Ben

    Something like this maybe?

    When a middle-aged man returns home to be with his dying father, he is confronted by the demons of the family’s past and must re-evaluate the relationship with his father.

    I hope this helps.
    Ben

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