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  1. Posted: July 1, 2016In: Drama

    A street stupid teen struggles to sell methamphetamine looted from a crimescene to fund his dream of making it big in Hollywood, as he’s pursued by a psychopath cop.

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    Added an answer on July 3, 2016 at 11:09 am

    Thanks Dkpough1. I agree that a time out will be a good idea. I was heading along that line anyway. I had a quick scan of my script this morning and I've come to the conclusion that I've put so much thought into the range of characters that I may just have neglected getting to know my MC. I have a bRead more

    Thanks Dkpough1.
    I agree that a time out will be a good idea. I was heading along that line anyway. I had a quick scan of my script this morning and I’ve come to the conclusion that I’ve put so much thought into the range of characters that I may just have neglected getting to know my MC. I have a bad habit of working backwards. I agree with all of your comments.

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  2. Posted: July 1, 2016In: Drama

    A street stupid teen struggles to sell methamphetamine looted from a crimescene to fund his dream of making it big in Hollywood, as he’s pursued by a psychopath cop.

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    Added an answer on July 3, 2016 at 2:21 am

    Thank you Nir Shelter. Yes, definitely some resistance on my behalf and I didn't view any comments made by your good self as pretentious, quite the opposite actually. It's great people are taking time out of their day to provide amateur writers with honest/knowledgeable advice to move their ideas foRead more

    Thank you Nir Shelter.
    Yes, definitely some resistance on my behalf and I didn’t view any comments made by your good self as pretentious, quite the opposite actually. It’s great people are taking time out of their day to provide amateur writers with honest/knowledgeable advice to move their ideas forward.
    When you spend so much time developing characters and allowing the interactions to unfold in your script, the advice given by others can be confronting,? especially knowing you have to go back and change things which inevitably send a ripple throughout the entire screenplay.
    I will download the book you suggested on my Kindle tomorrow(today I mean) and humbly take the advice on board. It may be the kick in the backside I need.

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  3. Posted: July 1, 2016In: Drama

    A street stupid teen struggles to sell methamphetamine looted from a crimescene to fund his dream of making it big in Hollywood, as he’s pursued by a psychopath cop.

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    Added an answer on July 2, 2016 at 9:25 am

    Again some valuable words dpg, I appreciate the constructive thought you put into your replies. To answer your question this is a feature film script. My first actually. Being as anxious as I am I began the writing process well before my idea had 3 complete acts. (motivated by a short course with DaRead more

    Again some valuable words dpg, I appreciate the constructive thought you put into your replies.
    To answer your question this is a feature film script. My first actually. Being as anxious as I am I began the writing process well before my idea had 3 complete acts. (motivated by a short course with David Trottier – Keepwriting). The journey has been one of many changes to both story and character. As much as I’d like to complete this script and be happy with the result, part of me wants to start on one of my new ideas and begin the process with a ‘solid’ logline first. (I’m battling whether that’s giving up or being smart).

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