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In a future where babies are no longer born, a black market dealer of artificial wombs must find his baby daughter when competitors take the womb and sell it to the highest bidder. (For #meetup)
wow, i want to watch this film. while i agree that the setting isn't necessary, what the first line does for me is give me genre and give me stakes. without "babies are no longer born" then the goal of needing to find "his baby daughter" is weaker and less urgent. with this first line the stakes areRead more
wow, i want to watch this film.
while i agree that the setting isn’t necessary, what the first line does for me is give me genre and give me stakes.
without “babies are no longer born” then the goal of needing to find “his baby daughter” is weaker and less urgent.
with this first line the stakes are clearer and the arc is stronger.
See lessIn a future where babies are no longer born, a black market dealer of artificial wombs must find his baby daughter when competitors take the womb and sell it to the highest bidder. (For #meetup)
wow, i want to watch this film. while i agree that the setting isn't necessary, what the first line does for me is give me genre and give me stakes. without "babies are no longer born" then the goal of needing to find "his baby daughter" is weaker and less urgent. with this first line the stakes areRead more
wow, i want to watch this film.
while i agree that the setting isn’t necessary, what the first line does for me is give me genre and give me stakes.
without “babies are no longer born” then the goal of needing to find “his baby daughter” is weaker and less urgent.
with this first line the stakes are clearer and the arc is stronger.
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thank you both for your feedback and questions, they are very helpful. i'll process and revise. i hope to post a revised logline soon. happy holidays!
thank you both for your feedback and questions, they are very helpful. i’ll process and revise. i hope to post a revised logline soon.
happy holidays!
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