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An artistic high schooler must choose between following her own dreams and attending med school with her teenage crush turned boyfriend while struggling to live up to her mother’s expectations.
Hi Odie, thank you so much for your feedback to improve my logline. Been stuck on it for a while now. Hope your writing is doing well and strong. Take care !
Hi Odie, thank you so much for your feedback to improve my logline. Been stuck on it for a while now.
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When Santa Claus goes rogue and begins kidnapping kids, a cynical 12-year-old must venture to the North Pole in order to save his abducted brother.
Hi NeedyGoldfish, Your idea is great but I feel like I needing to be more specific about why Santa Claus went rogue because it felt like a plot shortcut. (there is probaby is very good explanation) Would love to see this comedy on screen ! Good luck on the writing BO
Hi NeedyGoldfish,
Your idea is great but I feel like I needing to be more specific about why Santa Claus went rogue because it felt like a plot shortcut. (there is probaby is very good explanation)
Would love to see this comedy on screen !
Good luck on the writing
BO
See lessAn Elizabethan do-gooder is framed for his father's murder and takes refuge with the most notorious thieves in England. When their leader is captured, he must choose: join them and return to the scene of the crime, or run away and remain an outlaw.
Hi Legend_of, the beginning of your logline sounds interesting but then the second part is quite puzzling. Your character seems to either way become a criminal so what is really at stake ? Who's the antagonist in your main character's journey ? Ok it'll sound cliche but creating a character that wouRead more
Hi Legend_of,
the beginning of your logline sounds interesting but then the second part is quite puzzling. Your character seems to either way become a criminal so what is really at stake ? Who’s the antagonist in your main character’s journey ?
Ok it’ll sound cliche but creating a character that would hold back the do-gooder from running away like for example the daughter of the thieves leader or maybe a younger sibling that needs his care and make him want to fight and find out the real murderer could make us see the character’s struggles and make stakes higher.
What would he gain from running away ? Finding support from family away and heal himself from the pain o his father’s passing, saving his life because his father’s murderer is on to kill him …
It sounds promising but things are missing to make it exciting and thrilling to look forward to watching it.
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