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A young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.
Wow great advice thanks! This time, I wanted to try something completely different. No focus on the back story neither on the whole plot. Just the situation of a super hero who can't remember she's one and the shrink that don't help her that much. And try to suggest the many situations it can createRead more
Wow great advice thanks!
This time, I wanted to try something completely different. No focus on the back story neither on the whole plot. Just the situation of a super hero who can’t remember she’s one and the shrink that don’t help her that much. And try to suggest the many situations it can create for a sitcom.
what do you think :
“When a Super Heroine who turned amnesiac after an accident on a mission become the patient of a shrink with personality disorder to retrieve her memory, the world is not a safe place to be…”
See lessA young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.
Wow great advice thanks! This time, I wanted to try something completely different. No focus on the back story neither on the whole plot. Just the situation of a super hero who can't remember she's one and the shrink that don't help her that much. And try to suggest the many situations it can createRead more
Wow great advice thanks!
This time, I wanted to try something completely different. No focus on the back story neither on the whole plot. Just the situation of a super hero who can’t remember she’s one and the shrink that don’t help her that much. And try to suggest the many situations it can create for a sitcom.
what do you think :
“When a Super Heroine who turned amnesiac after an accident on a mission become the patient of a shrink with personality disorder to retrieve her memory, the world is not a safe place to be…”
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Would'nt it be interesting to give us a glimpse of why this discovery jeopardize his dream of succeeding as an athlete? And still I think you could nail a better adjective for your MC. Or as dpg putted it, stick with the "young man"... But it's way more straightforward than the first one. Good work!
Would’nt it be interesting to give us a glimpse of why this discovery jeopardize his dream of succeeding as an athlete? And still I think you could nail a better adjective for your MC. Or as dpg putted it, stick with the “young man”…
But it’s way more straightforward than the first one. Good work!
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