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A, no bullshit, hotshot archeologist comes face to face with a coldblooded tomb raider in a struggle to claim discovery of a lost Egyptian city of immeasurable wealth.
I would pick between 'no bullshit' and 'hotshot' to describe your main character, feels too wordy. The other thing I would think about is rephrasing your antagonist. The term 'tomb raider' has become synonymous with a single franchise, maybe grave robber? Here is my shot at it.. An ego driven archaeRead more
I would pick between ‘no bullshit’ and ‘hotshot’ to describe your main character, feels too wordy. The other thing I would think about is rephrasing your antagonist. The term ‘tomb raider’ has become synonymous with a single franchise, maybe grave robber? Here is my shot at it..
An ego driven archaeologist races against a coldblooded grave robber to lay claim to the treasures of a lost Egyptian city.
See lessThree philanthropic con-men search for love while trying to hide their criminal career from their suitors and trying to keep their philanthropy from the underworld they are wrapped up in.
Which plot line do you see as your A story? Hiding the the truth from the suitors or the other criminals? Which ever it is, I would focus the logline on that.
Which plot line do you see as your A story? Hiding the the truth from the suitors or the other criminals? Which ever it is, I would focus the logline on that.
See lessJake has drugs to pick up in Chicago, and Leah thinks they?re sharing gas across the county to see family, but when Leah finds out the truth she picks up a rock and throws it at Jake?s face. With no money to get them home, and an appointment to keep with a drug dealer the couple teams up to finish the job.
I agree with Monique. I think you have too much here. Distill it down to the bare bones. In her example she used 'reluctant' drug dealer. It's always good to give a quick one word description to your main character, especially one that denotes a flaw.
I agree with Monique. I think you have too much here. Distill it down to the bare bones. In her example she used ‘reluctant’ drug dealer. It’s always good to give a quick one word description to your main character, especially one that denotes a flaw.
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