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  1. Posted: January 28, 2013In: Public

    A novice hit woman accidentally kills her first employer and now must take out an avenging mob when they threaten to kill her family and relatives.

    bryson
    Added an answer on January 29, 2013 at 11:22 am

    Okay sharkeatingman...i will heed your warning. I do like the shorter version without giving away too much about the story.

    Okay sharkeatingman…i will heed your warning. I do like the shorter version without giving away too much about the story.

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  2. Posted: January 28, 2013In: Public

    A novice hit woman accidentally kills her first employer and now must take out an avenging mob when they threaten to kill her family and relatives.

    bryson
    Added an answer on January 29, 2013 at 12:38 am

    Thank you sharkeatingman for your comments. I was pretty excited about the idea when I came up with it and eagerly starting coming up with an outline for the script. Good points on the grammatical improvements - I will update accordingly.

    Thank you sharkeatingman for your comments. I was pretty excited about the idea when I came up with it and eagerly starting coming up with an outline for the script. Good points on the grammatical improvements – I will update accordingly.

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  3. Posted: January 28, 2013In: Public

    A novice hit woman accidentally kills her first employer and now must take out an avenging mob when they threaten to kill her family and relatives.

    bryson
    Added an answer on January 29, 2013 at 12:29 am

    Thanks for the feedback Kriss - below is an update to help make it more interesting. Although I think it is too long. To support her lavish lifestyle a model becomes a hit woman and accidentally kills her first employer - a notorious mob boss. When the mob threatens to kill her entire family she musRead more

    Thanks for the feedback Kriss – below is an update to help make it more interesting. Although I think it is too long.

    To support her lavish lifestyle a model becomes a hit woman and accidentally kills her first employer – a notorious mob boss. When the mob threatens to kill her entire family she must enlist the aid of her trainer – the Iceman.

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